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Writing a discriminating thesis

Credible versus discriminating thesis statements; responding to every part of the question
Essay craft · Organisation and development — thesis, evidence, sequencing and cohesion

What this note covers

  1. What the marking guide means by 'credible' and 'discriminating'
  2. Four ways to sharpen a credible thesis
  3. Thesis patterns for each question family
  4. Responding to every part of the question
  5. Where the thesis sits and how the introduction supports it
  6. Language for precise thesis statements
  7. Thesis practice set with feedback

7 sections · 10 key terms & formulas · 6 common mistakes

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