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Past the Shallows in HSC English Studies
Favel Parrett’s Past the Shallows uses the ocean to explore how care, fear and survival coexist for brothers in coastal Tasmania. Track the changing significance of the sea across the novel, then connect that pattern to a specific quality or motivation. Use a short passage and explain what the language makes the reader notice.
Worked example
Start with the contrast between the sea as a source of livelihood and the sea as a danger. Read a passage in which Miles goes out to work with his father alongside a passage focused on Harry’s experience of the coast. Mark language that makes the same place feel different to the two boys.
A paragraph could argue that the boys’ dependence on their surroundings complicates the idea of home as a place of safety. Support this with the exact language in your edition. The 2024 markers looked for a connection between the language of the ocean motif and the qualities, motives or actions the question asked about.
Official exam practice
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